More Erotic Fiction Tips

More advice for writing erotic fiction:

Okay, I’ve recently gotten addicted to erotic writing from the e-book community of erotic/romance writers.  I wrote about this a few weeks ago. 

Now, I am drawn to women writers, more than male writers.  I have had my fill of bad male erotic writers during my formative years.  Most of whom are living fantasies they will never achieve, or are writing for wish fulfillment.  However, these women writers can be just as bad, falling into the same tired old clichés over and over.

(Please note, both you and I would be fools if we thought that all e-published writers that sport female ‘nom de plumes’ are actually female… but I do believe that there are a greater percentage of real women out there.)

And please remember, all of the following advice comes from an over-opinionated bitch who likes to write a lot.  It means only as much as you want it to.

The Necklace, Chapter 2

This is the second chapter of an epic erotic story, that will take place over many chapters. Heck I even have a sequel to the darn thing in my head. Hopefully, I have the energy to complete this one.

You can find the previous chapter below:

• The Necklace, Chapter 1

I usually write very long drawn-out realistic encounters between people. But even I get the desire to just write about crazy sex situations. The Necklace series is meant to fulfill that desire. The character descends into more and more sexual situations as the story goes on. Just engages in every sexual/perverted fantasy I can think of (at least those that please me)

Disclaimer: If stories of sexual activity make you all wiggy and weirded out, please don’t read the following. It is intended as pure fantasy.

The Necklace, Chapter 1

This is the first chapter of an epic erotic story, that will take place over many chapters.  Heck I even have a sequel to the darn thing in my head.  Hopefully, I have the energy to complete this one.  

Some basic backstory:  I started writing erotic stories as a reaction to most of the male-dominated (even when writing as females) stroke material that exists on the Internet:  Bad grammar and sentence structure; poorly created female characters; lack of eroticsm and sensuality in favor of getting to the ‘good stuff’; complete lack of plot and setting; and unrealistic fantasies and situations.  

Or put another way.  I got sick of poorly told, girls are total sluts begging to be fucked in every way possible, by as many people as possible.   

I wrote my stories trying to avoid these things.  I would like to think that, in a very limited sense, I’ve achieved that (but I may be VERY wrong, who knows).  However, there is a part of me that wants to explore the side of eroticsm that is VERY taboo, but that my sense of realism doesn’t allow. 

I still get turned on by the sexual freedom that some crazy erotically charged women have in these stories.  But I want it to be well written.  I still want there to be plot and characters and fun settings.  But basically an outlet for every naughty, taboo, other-side-of-the-tracks fantasy I’ve ever had.   

Hence, this series.  Allowing me to explore a female protagonist that has a change that completely alters her outlook, tendencies, morals, and preferences towards sex, as well as the people around her (3 guesses what that device is, and the first 2 don’t count).  Now, there will be real characters in this story, but for the most part, there will be sexual encounters that don’t happen as organically as my realistic side prefers. So this is my way of getting around what I think the protagonist would do, and allow the evil side of my writing to creep in.   

I have recently re-written this, combining details from a set-up chapter, and an ‘action’ chapter, into a single chapter that gets going more quickly.   

Let’s see where this takes us.   

Cheers!   

Luna Zax   

Exhilaration

I usually always write stories on the actual blog site, for safety purposes.  So that any story I write is saved and captured, because sometimes I write stories and I am so engrossed in the telling that I forget to save the document.  The blog sites typically save stuff automatically.  So I wrote this story a few weeks ago, and did not save it, and of course, a blue screen of death took the original content with it. 

This is my recreation of that story.  The story is inspired by happenings that I witnessed when I was younger.  Someone feeling the exhilaration of a performance (acting, singing, playing instrument, etc), and the feelings after the performance is complete, then meets someone who they have been attracted to for quite sometime, and yet have never gone past flirting. As to why this has not happened, in my head there is a vague tabooness to the relationship, that I leave upto the reader to determine.  Feel free to choose what ever erotic pairing gives you pleasure.  This is an imagining of a young inexperienced girl who meets up with the wrong lover at the right time.

One final note, the story may give the reader an impression of virginity for the female protagonist.  When writing, I was trying to stress her inexperience both emotionally and physically, but not necessarily true innocence and virginity.  I hope that comes through.

Anyway, hope you enjoy.

Luna Zax

Four Wedding Stories – Part 3: The Bachelorette Party

The continuation of my “Four Wedding Stories” series… basically I came up with four sexy ‘lesbian’ scenarios all around weddings.   This one is probably the most emotional, but the most ‘crazy’…  Part of this story spun out of my epic erotic lesbian story that I have permanently put on the back burner. 

Links to previous episodes in the Four Wedding Stories Series:

Four Wedding Stories – Part 1: The Fitting

Four Wedding Stories – Part 2: The Bridesmaids

This one is a little more fevered and all over the place.  It’s probably a much longer story, but one whose characters don’t really demand more time spent with them.  So they are more shallow than I anticipated when I started writing this.  Regardless, I think the fantasy, and the eroticsm of the moments and the emotions are real enough.

Anyway, hope you enjoy.

Luna Zax

Weekend Friends – Part 1a: Arrival

A beginning, hopefully…

This is the start of a story I have been trying to write for quite some time.  The story is that of a younger girl discovering pleasures with another friend her age.  The setting is the beach, during the summertime, and it does hit home for me, based on my childhood. 

This is going to be another slow one, and in fact this chapter is 100% set-up, without even a hint of any thing going on.  So if you’re looking for ‘action’, it’s not found in this post. 

Let me know what you think,

Luna

Chat Recap (with Sasha and Paula)

Post Edited on Friday, May 22, 2009

Okay, this is the edited version of a previous posting.  I started a chat with Paula (aka gymlinks) and my friend Sasha joined in.  Basically, as you will see, gymlinks asked me to tell her how I would seduce a younger girl (tween or awkward early teen). 

What follows is simply a stream of consciousness of a fantasy in my own head.  Certainly nothing meant by it, other than a story written on the fly. 

Four Wedding Stories – Part 2: The Bridesmaids

Finally, after months of planning and writing, here is the second installment in the Four Wedding Stories series. The first in the series, The Fitting, can be found here.

I’m sorry for the delay… I say that the erotic muses didn’t visit me too often, but that’s only half of the truth… The truth is that I created characters that spoke to me, on such a ‘real’ level, that it was very difficult to write a ‘quickie’ erotic story about them. Jana and Amy became very real to me, over the last six months. And I couldn’t do them the disservice to them.

Anyway, the plan is to post this here, so the few readers that hit this site first, get first crack. Then I will post it to the usual other places: Nifty and Leslita etc.

Enjoy!

Luna Zax

P.S. Please note, this is not a “sequel” to the fitting… None of the stories are even inner related. Probably should have, but so be it.

Cherry Bomb

This is a real-life encounter, changed to make a better story… I will leave it up to you to determine which part actually happened and which part did not.

Slight warning, this story probably teases more than it delivers.

Be forewarned.

Cheers! Luna

Other Authors

I have been in contact with a very dear girl, named Keiko… who has written some very sexy stories for the lesbian lolita site (leslita).  Anyway, she wrote a very sexy story one day…  it was very hot, made my blood (and other liquids in my body) boil….

I asked her permission to add it to the blog, and she agreed… 

It’s a very intimate story about a mother taking her young daughter home on the train, and seeing a young girl on the train as well.  There’s a definite twist at the end… but I’d hate to spoil it. 

I’ve added a new page to the site called: Stories from Other Authors , you can access the story there (as well as any future stories from other authors) .

If anyone reading this post would like to share a story and have me post it, please feel free to email me.  Keep in mind, I have high standards and won’t just post a run of the mill stroke/rub story.  Give me something good, that you’re worked on a while and are proud of… 

Comment here, or email me at lunabi93@hotmail.com

Love!

Luna